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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-09-30 07:26 AM

it could be the clarita I guess
some morning early, flowing
from the santa rosa's

or it could be you wearing metaphors
bending the metal reflections
of the river's whispers

my hands are useless as sails
and my body the heavy stone canoe
windless but blessed for the still

and the bosomed dawn feeding babies
she says she prefers the pain
of a smile with teeth then

for her tingling knowledge femininity
waiting at the street corner of day
to walk, don't walk but run

uphill to an imagination ocean
___
dark

scribnote: it could be the clarita I guess
some morning early, flowing from the santa rosa's..or it could be you wearing metaphors

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-09-30 07:34 AM

More metaphors, please?

Obsidian Snow
Member

since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

2 posted 2005-09-30 09:52 AM

You have a way of writing to each and every female that reads. A much admired talent.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-09-30 11:18 AM

ms sunshine...welcome back to cali...
she is lovely this time of year
thank you..

_________

obsnow..thank you ms, it seems that most of life is at least partly female..even this state..and this time of day

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2005-09-30 05:08 PM

or it could be you wearing metaphors
bending the metal reflections
of the river's whispers

psst....what did you hear that made you write this? It's lovely.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2005-09-30 05:47 PM

ms Kaoru..I imagine it was the sound of dawn
stepping in high heals over the foothills
and the whispering of the clarita
as she mentioned her day dreams in babbletalk

thank you ms

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

6 posted 2005-09-30 05:59 PM

"You have a way of writing to each and every female that reads. A much admired talent."

Yesssss he does!!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2005-10-01 12:04 PM

nice, good to read you again. hope all is well with you.

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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