Open Poetry #36 |
A sequal from First Depression (A miracle) |
Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
The Lord was here for me He showed me the way The way to my destiny My destiny to a miracle My first depression about my soon-to-become best friend we are back together as friends When I went to school today I prayed and I prayed then the bell rung for school to start I bumped into someone It was the person that was mad at me she gave me a big hug and said things were going to be ok We are talking again I am so glad to be her friend My gloominess is going away I am now ok Now for a miracle kiss Poetry can get you very far |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Laura! I puckered up and look what I got. You silly girl. That was fun. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Larry C~ Thanks for your response, LOL thats what you get, See in the beginning I just wanted to make things sounds gloomy and religious and then at the end, make a laugh. glad it took effect on you Poetry can get you very far -Laura |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
This was very touching and funny. Glad you two are friends again (big warm mutant lobster huggs) -may the force be with you in poetry |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
This is so cute. It made me laugh when I saw that monkey face at the end. LMAO Keep up the great poetry!!! Poetry is beauty in words. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hey Laura, I am so glad this all worked out for you....true friendship is a rare thing....it looks as though your prayers were answered.... ~~**~~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Besides being an angel, you're a trixie pixie! I near fell off my cloud when I came to that monkey with the lucious lips! I had to kiss her! I am so pleased that you got over your "first depression" so quickly! May any others that you may have along your way in life, be lifted so readily! Life's good! Loveya, Dear One! EA |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Angelheart your poems are always a delight! How did you get a picture of my X? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just so adorable...I'm glad you and your friend are okay now. AND I love the monkey! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
great pic glad for you. i visited a friend today, i was angry at, and had hurt feelings from her behavior towords me, but i am glad i stopped by, i am sorry for thoughts and words of stupidity. hope she forgives me. she too deserves better in life. My spirit will rise |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Uplifting and wise message lovingly presented! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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