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Rhythm and Time
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Rhythm and Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rhythm and Time There seems a rhythm and a rhyme That beats within our chaos time It is the green of in-between That seems to stimulate the keen It brings reaction of an age A rage upon a passing stage A shout that pulses in the breeze That makes the leaves to dance the trees It’s when they loose their hold and fall That makes the song to change its call To bring a season to its close To shut my nostrils to expose Its then in sleep within the cold Sounding zees of warm enfold Dreaming rhymes within the night Until the coming of the light For then its Eden once again For rhymes and rhythms of the pen |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morning Seymour, Well, if you are going to gift us each day with words such as this ... then go ahead and  ... keep on dreamin'.colder, snuggly weather is great for sleepin' & dreamin' though...hee hee hugs, Chris |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Just smiling here, Sy. Beautiful rhythm and rhyme to start the morning with poetic grace. Lovely!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, I love your rhythm and your rhyme. You do both so beautifully!! Sleep those dreamy dreams and pen more poetic gifts.  ~Smiles, Hugs, & Tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Sonneteer! Your rhythm and rhyme are sublime! "Its then in sleep within the cold Sounding zees of warm enfold Dreaming rhymes within the night Until the coming of the light" ~ Awww, ain't that the truth!  Beautifully written, Sir T! Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA zzzz....zzzz....zzzz.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loverly...peaceful... Love your style Sy...Morning! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I always enjoy your rhymes and rhythms. You make me smile. K |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Its then in sleep within the cold Sounding zees of warm enfold Dreaming rhymes within the night Until the coming of the light For then its Eden once again For rhymes and rhythms of the pen' You make such good poetic sense !!!! Thank you for sharing your zees of the night~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your Eden is always a blessing, not only for you, but for all of us, dear Seymour! Beautiful! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris Thank you sweety. Kit Enjoying the lovely. Nancy Thank you love. Earth Angel Just love angel hugs and  LeeJ Thank you and good morning sweet. Kahlil What do they say, a smile a day------ Marge Thank you sweety pop. Margherita For that you get an extra hug. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
five star poem you rock Mr. Tabin -may the force be with you in poetry |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
There seems a rhythm and a rhyme That beats within our chaos time And, dear Seymour, I have seen no better rhyme and time than you can do, sir!! Thank you for allowing me to read it for these three years!! I have enjoyed them all!! Hugs, Ethel  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharksbean Now that's a nice comment. Ethel You are the greatest. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW....what a commentary on the times we are in--yes, it is like that....and I especially like your Eden! ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana, Thank you for the delightful comment. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful, Sy. Your poetry is such a joy to read. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
such a good poem, thanks for sharing.this Poetry can get you very far |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick As are your comments. Hugs Angelheart Thank you for reading. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed the rhythm of your rhymes Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you my friend. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good evening sir: thanks for a well welcomed smile and honor to read your wise words My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Where have you been, thank you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh around, taking life slow and easy. good day to you. My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES OK Then please stick around. LOL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks your too kind My spirit will rise |
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