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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-09-28 08:11 PM

The Wind

The wind is blowing
as the trees sway back and forth
leaves blow here and there

9-28-05

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-09-28 08:12 PM

Hi Sue!
Felt in tune with this little gem of a write.
Well done.
TD

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

2 posted 2005-09-28 08:14 PM

Thank you, Kathleen!

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-09-28 10:33 PM

I loved your words but politicans kept coming to mind as they sway and dodge

Blown lies swayed
As politicians sought truth
here and there

Bodger

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2005-09-28 10:38 PM

feels kind of whimsical
and drifting on clouds
nice

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2005-09-28 11:02 PM

I like the "back and forth"
"here and there".
I'm there....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-09-28 11:32 PM

Sue, I can hear the wind and picture the trees swaying and leaves blowing all over the place!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

7 posted 2005-09-29 03:37 PM

sounds like a description of paradise to me. thank you for sharing this

-may the force be with you in poetry

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2005-09-29 03:46 PM

Hello Sue!! Sounds like you had a windy day!!

I've seen a few of those around here lately.

An excellent haiku, Hon.
It's good to see you.
Hugs,
Ethel

CalicoMemories
Junior Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 15
the wind in the trees

9 posted 2005-09-29 04:49 PM

Beautiful harmony.

I am one person.
I am a chorus of a thousand souls.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2005-09-29 06:11 PM

SuzieQuzie~

~Wind blows poetic
Your gentle words find my eyes
Thank you, poetess~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2005-09-29 06:51 PM

Autumn....sounds like autumn. Enjoyed, Sue.

....jo

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2005-09-29 07:45 PM

a bit breezy here, too Sue...

nicely written

M

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

13 posted 2005-09-29 09:07 PM

ooohh! yes it's old school too! I love my old school poetry.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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