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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-09-28 03:39 PM



A Sigh’s Confession


I would
have given
two breaths
just to have
lived one
with you

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2005-09-28 03:41 PM


The romantic strikes again! And so short and sweetly too.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Kaoru
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2 posted 2005-09-28 03:48 PM


holy....wow........
Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2005-09-28 04:27 PM


The nymph of my poetic dreams
Words soft yet sharp

This is why I like to read your poetry.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-09-28 04:49 PM


The amazing Helen returns!!!
luv this! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
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5 posted 2005-09-28 04:57 PM


very nice. and short and sweet. thanks for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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6 posted 2005-09-28 05:04 PM


this is very sweet thanks for sharing
iliana
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7 posted 2005-09-28 06:09 PM


Perfect, Helen, just plain perfect!   ....jo
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8 posted 2005-09-28 08:50 PM


Mmmm ....       catching my breath on this one ....

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

Huan Yi
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9 posted 2005-09-28 09:28 PM



Very Japanese

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10 posted 2005-10-05 02:17 PM


Oh, my... this takes my breath... and leaves me applauding!
Janette
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11 posted 2005-10-05 07:49 PM


GASP!

WOW ... this one is fabulously powerful.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Juju
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In your dreams
12 posted 2005-10-05 08:26 PM


wOW i MISSED YOUR STUFF!

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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