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Sharksbean
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0 posted 2005-09-27 05:24 PM


everyone loves to eat donuts this is a fact
but what would happen if donuts attacked
they'd dunk us in coffee and glaze us over then they'd feed us to their pet bagel rover or they might stuff us with creamy filling and then theyd eat us those evil vilians so be careful what you eat for if youre not careful youre food will eat you and thats saying a mouthful


-may the force be with you in poetry

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-09-27 05:34 PM


Sharksbean
Cute, enjoyed.

yv
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2 posted 2005-09-27 05:55 PM


HaHa!!  Delightful write!!  I never thought of it that way...thanks for the warning!!  And Welcome to Passions!!!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Sharksbean
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3 posted 2005-09-27 06:02 PM


thank you and you may want to avoid the crispy creams they'll bite your arm off

-may the force be with you in poetry

Angelheart
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4 posted 2005-09-27 06:02 PM


LOL thats a good one. and yes I happen to think that way sometimes, with the whole "food thing" but o well.. thanks for sharing, Mr. Donut man! LOL

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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5 posted 2005-09-27 06:10 PM



Oh, no! Say it isn't so! I'm going to be afraid to even eat a potato with all those eyes staring back at me! Potato

Here's a donut for you. This one is safe to eat because I baked it myself and it's angel food!  Donut 3

Loves 'n laughs,
EA

Sharksbean
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6 posted 2005-09-27 06:22 PM


thanks EarthAngel I hope we'll see some funny poetry come from you lots a lafs Sharksbean

-may the force be with you in poetry

sweetpoetess
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7 posted 2005-09-28 12:35 PM


Man, how did you know my weakness is for donuts. LOL This made me laugh. Keep up the good poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

StevenS
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8 posted 2005-09-28 01:07 PM


Sharksbean I LOL at that one. Great!
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9 posted 2005-09-28 05:36 PM




a much needed and yummy smile ...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

LeeJ
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10 posted 2005-09-29 12:53 PM


I HATE DONUTS, yeah right, my first job was working in a bakery...hehehe
mmmm, mmmmm, those freshly baked glaced donuts still warm....

enjoyed!

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