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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-09-22 04:52 PM



Watching for her
In the corridor—

A school bell rings


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-09-22 09:20 PM



Last year's
puppy love

renewed...

or?

skewed....


wondering now.

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-09-22 10:59 PM


perhaps a young daughters first day of school?
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
3 posted 2005-09-22 11:19 PM


LOL that would be my guess, this is something about how I like your poems, we try and guess at what things appear to be.. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2005-09-23 07:49 AM


... the entry bells ... an invitation to discover the unknown

... the exit bells ... almost always a relief!

Happy First Day for the one concerned!

Love,
Margherita


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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5 posted 2007-04-25 05:35 PM


principal with black rim  glasses.
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