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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-07-09 05:05 PM



Briefly
In a blue sky
Among white clouds

Even if the young man falls
What it was
To fly

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Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2005-07-09 08:23 PM


I like this one alot.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2005-07-09 09:04 PM


magnificent!

M

take bread away from me, if you wish, take air away. but do not take from me your laughter.

~neruda~

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2005-07-09 10:52 PM


I heard of "icarus" from anime...

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-07-09 11:16 PM


BRAVO!
one of your BEST

Sunshine
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5 posted 2005-07-09 11:23 PM


It WAS...

magnificent!

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