having life, having you...

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #36

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-19 03:34 PM

Understand things
that were apart of you
your the person that I care of too
I am glad that I am with you

I see your smiling face
in every way

I see myself turning towards you
sharing that life
and hope that was meant to be
to have a life together
shared with us and we

sharing life
sharing care
that are waiting to come true

having life
having you
is what is coming true
Thanks for being you!

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

1 posted 2005-09-19 03:38 PM

This poem is absolutely lovely...I love the whole feel of it as it wraps us in your heartfelt feelings...**big hugs**

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-09-19 05:35 PM

Your heart is that of an angel.

"sharing life
sharing care
that are waiting to come true"

~ Sounds loverly! Keep the faith, angelheart!

Love & Light,
EA

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2005-09-20 06:40 AM

So lovingly sweet

Hope

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2005-09-20 06:47 AM

Your words are effervescent bubbles of trust and joy.

When "life" contains "you" it is perfect.

Love,
Margherita

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

5 posted 2005-09-20 11:34 AM

One word girl: sweet.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

6 posted 2005-09-20 04:34 PM

Thank you all for the wonderful replies.. Its amazing how I can just shut my eyes and type as i would do a poem..

that is what i did in here and indeed it did come from the heart..

thanks again for all the reads

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.