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Belief
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Belief |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Bleeding almost dripping heart echoed emotion that never sought nor caused but images Weeds grow trampled to fill beneath stones feeding insects and birds Asphalt steaming melting as a drunken road layer's evening of respite Honesty echoing forlorn in a late morning's light of a night exploring doubt and feeling A drunk picks at ideas in a depth of mind only another drunk can understand to stagger subjects A dark path on a route hitched to air that walks and origins and destinations A seat on a closed station for a re-routed train that left to make it's next stop minus passengers and care Moments emphasing self emboldened in belief Of belief That only in ignorance started belief Without belief ever as a target |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
very interesting and your poem ended in a surprising bang......thanks for sharing.... Poetry can get you very far |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
The aim was for the character to go with a whimper Thanks Bodger |
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