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crazy4u
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since 2001-10-28
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0 posted 2005-09-15 02:40 AM



A string attached from here to there
Unspoken-of tie it is.
I don’t like the impression I get
When I feel all tied up
Squirming around to break free
You tug and twist once more
I don’t like that you have put me here
Please let me know how to go.
I don’t want to hurt you
I think that you are swell
But you are getting on my nerves
When you think this is all right.
How do I let you down nicely,
By keeping it amicable?
Or should I just bring out the scissors
And break free!
Perhaps I’ll learn
How to survive
In this tangled
Mess you've made.


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2005-09-15 02:46 AM


It is like that...yep, it is.  The string, though invisible, is.  Only time dissolves it until you have some magic scissors.  Enjoyed the read, crazy4u!   ......jo
crazy4u
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since 2001-10-28
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2 posted 2005-09-15 02:57 AM


thank you for taking the time to read and add a comment Jo

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2005-09-15 07:50 AM


You are so right , it can often feel like your tied  up in knots

Hope

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