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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-09-12 08:40 AM



    


Infinite Chaos


Infinite chaos in a stream
Flying cosmos in a dream
Swarms within a vision held
Making strata of the meld

From the water comes the mortar
Forming thoughts of mind and order
Cementing memories and desire
Melting steel within its fire

And rainbows stay the waters go
O’er alters rocks where e’er they flow
To pigment in the wildest shade
In ranges that will never fade

Here within this pictures frame
I stake my claim a moments aim
And live an instant of my will
Watching rocks where waters spill

A finite of infinity
Twilight of serenity



    





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scorpio
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1 posted 2005-09-12 08:45 AM


Wow Sy! A dynamic write and pictures to start my day.  You inspire us all.

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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2 posted 2005-09-12 08:53 AM


Oh my Sy!!
What a spectacular write!
And the pics...well...I do believe perhaps JM had a hand in this?
Have a wonderful day!
Hugs & Luv, Nancy

I wait now at the lake or walking by the bay
I wait and listen or put a seashell
to my ear and it all comes back
the wind's soft murmur..and you.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-09-12 08:57 AM


Bravo, Mr. T.! I do believe that that is the first picture that you have posted with your illustrious writes!

I absolutely love everything about this post! It is so dynamic and colourful and full of life and motion and spirit!

"And rainbows stay the waters go
O’er alters rocks where e’er they flow
To pigment in the wildest shade
In ranges that will never fade"

~ A perfect melding of pic and poem!

"Watching rocks where waters spill"

~ One of my favourite ways to relax and connect with nature.

May you have an infinity of serene twilights!

Love you!
EA
Flowers

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4 posted 2005-09-12 11:03 AM


Wow! Love this I do !!
Hugs to you Seymour on this sunny September morn. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Angelheart
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5 posted 2005-09-12 01:17 PM


this was good.. thanks for sharing...
iliana
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6 posted 2005-09-12 01:22 PM


Bravo!  Bravo!  Sy, I loved the artwork with your words.  Stunning renderings!   .......jo
Margherita
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7 posted 2005-09-12 01:26 PM


Wow! What a surprise! Me too I am very pleased by this wonderful presentation!

Your words are amazing, dear Seymour.

Great inspiration.

Love and joy.
Margherita

Martie
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8 posted 2005-09-12 05:41 PM


Sy

You do those photos proud!!  

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9 posted 2005-09-12 06:00 PM


Wow this is great!!
good write
bernie

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nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2005-09-12 08:26 PM


Here within this pictures frame
I stake my claim a moments aim
And live an instant of my will
Watching rocks where waters spill

A finite of infinity
Twilight of serenity


I'd join you if I could.... nice spill
M

Janet Marie
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11 posted 2005-09-12 11:19 PM


And rainbows stay the waters go
O’er alters rocks where e’er they flow
To pigment in the wildest shade
In ranges that will never fade

Here within this pictures frame
I stake my claim a moments aim
And live an instant of my will
Watching rocks where waters spill

A finite of infinity
Twilight of serenity

    





       

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2005-09-12 11:22 PM


thank you me sweet Sy-guy...you know what it means to me that you find inspiration in my photos...when you add your vision to the creek's depth and beauty...we all see more clearly.

*ww*




Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-09-13 08:01 AM


To all my friends the humbelist of thanks and to my insperation Janet Marie, without your magic it would be tragic.     
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