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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2005-09-12 12:04 PM


It's been a while
get around to doing
making time
the already made and packaged
variety of sizes and shapes
grandpa tick toc
work whistle
pendulum swings
look what life brings.


modulated
geared
encapsulated
feared


been a while to investigate
where it goes
when it flies
shadows progress across barren lands
stumps mark flourished tree stands
time maintains its momentum
the pendulum swings
an alarm rings


dear can you answer the door
time has etched another score
or cast its rhythm on a mantle ledge
determined the extent of a picnic spread.

modulated
encapsulated
geared
feared.





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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

1 posted 2005-09-12 12:08 PM


enjoyed muchly.
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2005-09-12 09:25 PM


"dear can you answer the door
time has etched another score
or cast its rhythm on a mantle ledge
determined the extent of a picnic spread."

Well said, Martin!   ....jo

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