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Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-09-10 07:36 PM



WHAT MAKES ME UNQUIE
YOU WILL NOT BELIEVE
OF WHAT I SHARE WITH OTHERS
THE FRIENDSHIPS I BEAR
I STRUGGLE THROUGH THE BAD TIMES
I STRUGGLE THE BAD
BUT ONE THING I JUST MIGHT ADD
I AM GLAD TO TAKE THE STEPS
AND I AM DETERMINED TO MAKE IT HAPPEN
TO MAKE SOME PEOPLE BE LAUGHIN
BUT ONE THING_____
I AM NOT THE ONLY ONE
IN MY MIND AND SOUL
I TRUELY BELIEVE
I COULDNT DO THIS WITHOUT A TOUCHING HAND
SHINING DOWN ON ME
SHINING THERE ABOVE ME

I HAVE MANY DIFFERENT FRIENDS
THAT MAKE ME HAPPY TOO
THEY SHARE THE FRIENDSHIPS THROUGH
THEY TELL ME WHAT I AM MADE OF TOO
I TRY SO HARD TO BE NICE TO OTHERS
TO BE LOYAL TO OTHERS
TO SHARE THAT GIFT OF ME
I AM GLAD I HAVE MY FRIENDS, GOD, AND MY FAMILY TO LOVE ME

I want to become this singer...
I love to sing
I want to give my heart out to the world...
my voice is real soft
I will strenghen it
I believe that i have a voice of an angel
that will touch other people's heart's
god is great and god is good...
I want to live a life of love and not of lust and cheat my way through .

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-09-10 07:58 PM


I love how you feel about yourself, dear Angelheart!

Your intentions are beautiful, as are your words.

To be grateful is so important and your enthusiasm will carry you far ...

Love,
Margherita

sweetpoetess
Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
2 posted 2005-09-10 11:49 PM


Girl you are full of confidence in yourself. That is a good thing. Keep up the good writing.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-09-11 04:32 PM



Having God, family and friends who love you, understanding yourself, liking yourself, having goals and having faith in yourself sounds like the recipe to having a satisfying life!

It was good to get to know you better!

Love, Light, & Life,
EA

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
4 posted 2005-09-11 04:43 PM


all of us love you
yet God loves you even more
the true perfect love

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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