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Tim
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0 posted 2005-09-09 09:53 PM


Once, a young man ran atop the levee
not as a god but as a god might run
effortlessly
in cadence with the chant of river's current
now the levee sits barren,
intonations of the river
echoing off ghosts of city past
© Copyright 2005 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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1 posted 2005-09-09 10:33 PM

That is such an interesting story   Keep it up
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-09-10 04:53 PM

today, this makes for an eerie image
Margherita
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3 posted 2005-09-10 07:50 PM

Wonderful piece of poetry, dear Tim.

Love,
Margherita
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