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Walk With Her
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Walk With Her |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Walk With Her Before the stars bed themselves, one can pretend it is still night, counting on the seven sisters to walk with her… when the night sounds are less, and two deer, discovered, pretend they don’t notice, but saunter away, nevertheless… even though she would reach toward them, pretending to be Sleeping Beauty and one with nature Trees have changed their tone… their tips, curling inward, no longer whisper with the breeze, but shush away on the fading of summer… Can you hear me? I am with all of you, even, even in my decline, when just a memory of a warm day touches soft, a long ago ever was when one can pretend it is still night, counting on the stars to walk with her. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and the colder the night gets, the more this is true wonderful piece |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is so very soft and loving, so very well crafted to dear Lady. Hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I did not want to walk..but, rather to tip-toe gently through this beauty. How softly your pen touches the parchment. Once again your eloquence shines through. Hugs, Sis. Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is just so lovely, sissie....a delight to read this morning!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
when the night sounds are less, and two deer, discovered, pretend they don’t notice, but saunter away, nevertheless… even though she would reach toward them,pretending to be Sleeping Beauty and one with nature stunning! and this Trees have changed their tone… their tips, curling inward, no longer whisper with the breeze, but shush away on the fading of summer… ahhh, dear missy, this projected me there... how beautifully you've spoken her... thank you |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this one alot. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Trees have changed their tone… their tips, curling inward, no longer whisper with the breeze, but shush away on the fading of summer… Beautiful Karilea. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is beautiful, SIL! ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sun Light! "Trees have changed their tone… their tips, curling inward, no longer whisper with the breeze, but shush away on the fading of summer…" ~ If I quoted all the lines that were highly appealing to this reader, I would have been writing out the whole poem! However, the above lines were especially memorable for this avid fan of the fruits born of your writing abilities! Love & Sun Shine, Linda |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, this is wonderful and so enjoyed, thank you for sharing dear friend, a pleasure to read. Sincerely Rick |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Gee Kari, this is beautiful and magical, yes....with a hint of dark. a  Mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely write! I think I saw the word "magical" in the thread and yes, it is definitely that. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I don't do much pretending. Maybe, I should. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Can you hear me? I am with all of you, even, even in my decline, when just a memory of a warm day touches soft, a long ago ever was'''' if you whisper, they will listen.....  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Tender words that weave a vision of a lonely walk on a clear night that makes it not lonely at all...I love the feel of this poem...**big hugs** |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well I know I read this before, but I saw the name and had to click for my daily dose of SUNSHINE. Love ya lady! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I am with all of you, even, even in my decline, when just a memory of a warm day touches soft, a long ago ever was" sometimes its what get us through. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To "Walk With Her" is to acknowledge time passing, more swiftly with each season. Sigh. Wonderful piece. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine There is a warm sun today.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a beautiful atmosphere you created, dear Karilea! Love, Margherita |
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