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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-07-08 07:33 AM


Fiddling

I fiddle in the morning’s sun
Counting flowers one by one
Stirring up the soil below
With a pencil as a hoe

They comfort me a day’s delight
Not only sight but what I write
They turn my thoughts to colored hew
To valley’s green and skies of blue

They are the waters of my drought
The words that fill my mind and sprout
Illusions of my filigree
The wings I use to set me free

I theme and dream in flower power
Much of day and nightly hour
Ever seeking in my quest
To do and act my very best

And in the squeaking of my pen
I try to speak of mice and men


© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-07-08 07:44 AM


Sir Sonneteer, that was exquisite and most definitely a welcomed new addition to Earth Angel's library of Sonnets by Mr. T. !

~ A piece of poetic perfection. That was beautiful beyond words. Thy pen is a veritable extension of thy beautiful and illustrious soul!

Angel hugs & kisses,

EA
Flowers

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-07-08 09:13 AM


A most beautiful piece you gift us with this morn Sy!
Very much enjoyed this lovely!
~Friday smiles & hugs, Nancy~

Juju
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In your dreams
3 posted 2005-07-08 09:39 AM


I liked this one.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-07-08 01:54 PM


flower power! yes!
Sunshine
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5 posted 2005-07-08 02:28 PM



How green is my valley...
lush emerald when penned
with such...love...






Janet Marie
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6 posted 2005-07-08 08:46 PM


And in the squeaking of my pen
I try to speak of mice and men

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Oh you do...you do...
you are the BIG CHEESE of rhyme


Stirring up the soil below
With a pencil as a hoe


and I thank the lord each day that you do.
(and that I get to read them.) *S*


*ww*

suthern
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7 posted 2005-07-25 03:14 PM


Keep fiddling, my friend... for the music you make is sweet to our ears. *S*
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