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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-08-31 07:27 AM


I Watched

I watched the light descend to dim
Descending down horizons rim
And there it lowered out of sight
Bringing on the dark of night

A million stars appeared the sky
A milky way to flood my eye
And silence took command the scene
My mind was full of awes morphine

Sometimes I ride a phantoms course
Among the stars and at a loss
Groping in a fantasy
Within a breeze of ecstasy

I sail this course until the dawn
Where stars turn into dew of morn
And there within the light of way
I journey through another day

So which is pith and which is myth
And which the hand of the blacksmith


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Rick
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since 2001-06-21
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Victoria, Australia
1 posted 2005-08-31 07:42 AM


Seymour.

I watched the light as well my friend
until its awe display did end
And I watched the stars combine
And then I read your words so fine

Enjoyed your words yet again dear friend.

Be well and take care.

Sincerely
Rick


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-08-31 08:11 AM


Rick
And there is plenty of dew for you.
Thank you

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-08-31 08:14 AM


A million stars appeared the sky
A milky way to flood my eye
And silence took command the scene
My mind was full of awes morphine

~*~

So...you DID hear my falling star wish!

Good morning, Sy!





LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-08-31 08:17 AM


It's so nice to see you waving a bright banner of greatness in our world...loved this...and it is from these offerings of others, as yourself, we to are lifted....hugs poet friend, have a great day
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2005-08-31 09:52 AM


Sunshine
Yes I did.

LeeJ
Thank you sweet and hugs back.

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