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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-08-30 07:23 AM


Oh, but to touch that brighter star
there, shining in a far off galaxy
    distant in the future.
If I could reach past that source of your pain
and sprinkle stardust that has floated down
from the heavens and blow it     gently
across the trails that you walk
in hopes that                  perhaps
tomorrow your steps could fall         lighter
so that you    might tread                softer
upon that path                within.

I would fly straight through the heavens
holding your hand
to make all of your dreams come true.

Dance!  Oh how we would dance
and the Gods in celestial skies
would be jealous
when Luna shone her light
upon two souls              held
in harmonies delight.


There are stars~
millions
in the universe
but yours....
     

yours shines brighter
than those that just         hang there
clinging........to the darkness.



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-08-30 07:50 AM


This can have several meanings.  I'm going
to hold on tightly to the one I see here...


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2 posted 2005-08-30 10:39 AM


hey

sometimes, clinging to the darkness shows one the light.....I too, see several meaning within this....you are beautiful for each....


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iliana
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4 posted 2005-08-31 11:10 PM


Words from a friend make a difference....I'm sure whomever you wrote this for knows you are there for them.  Enjoyed.....jo
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