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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2005-08-28 10:57 AM

Patience
was never
a
Virtue
when it
came to
YOU
My heart
always felt
cliche
when
curled up
in your
aura
My body
surrending
to your
star laced
kiss
Is it wrong
for me
Am I rebounding
my pain
when
I dream
of
YOU
You
did this to me
fed me
your sweet
honesty
when
he was
killing me softly...
You
did this to me
Answering my dreams
Now
I'm bathing
in cliches
My heart
doing a circus act
craving your attention
My composure
standoffish
I'm a walking contradiction
hungry for your affection
I'm on the edge
of this cliff
ready to fall
into
this unfolding celtic spread...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-08-28 11:15 AM

wow!

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

2 posted 2005-08-28 04:38 PM

great write!

hugs, g

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2005-08-28 06:44 PM

Patience expressed impatiently I would say, because there is a fantastic rhythm to this poem!

Great!

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-08-28 06:50 PM

Nice...James

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

5 posted 2005-08-28 10:42 PM

My heart
always felt
cliche
when
curled up
in your
aura

Do I ever know this feeling.
Kristen, I have always enjoyed your poetry, and this is definately not an exception.

http://www.mysticwicks.com
(try the after dark section)

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2005-08-29 03:55 PM

I too, love the lines Ringo quoted, outstanding!

It feels like ages since i've read you!

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2005-12-15 07:36 AM

bump, a great second read.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2005-12-15 05:43 PM

I'm a walking contradiction

Are you talkin' to me?

Are YOU . . . talkin'. . . to me?

Areyoutalklintome?

(sorry having a deNiro moment)

Kris, I know and am sorry but man you were referring TO me in that line, right?

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-12-18 04:04 AM

nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2005-12-18 08:28 AM

So glad this popped
back to the top!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2005-12-18 08:33 AM

Kristen~

Sitting here *smiling* with recall ...

'I'm a walking contradiction
hungry for your affection'

... yes, I've been just that hungry before~

A WONDERFUL write dear poetess~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

jinx26
Junior Member

since 2005-12-12

Posts 38
Jersey

12 posted 2005-12-18 09:03 AM

I loved this it will be stuck with me for a while ....

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

13 posted 2005-12-19 10:47 PM

thank you all..and Sue..uhh sure whatever makes you happy

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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