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Unencumbered and Free |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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 NASA Sky Image Unencumbered and Free ~ Linda L. Dowd ~ +*+*+*+*+*+ I climb flaxen tendrils streaming down from the moon, And sway on beams of light to the tune, Clair de Lune. As veils of darkest night rise to meet starlit sky, My spirit joins in song with angels winging by. I breathe in the coolness of a late summer’s night, And meld with the heavens as my spirit takes flight. I fly into the ethers, unencumbered and free, I’m at peace with myself and a part of All Be. +*+*+*+*+*+ |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
How up-lifting! This is a vastly beautiful arrangement. Only one thing I didn't quite follow: "My soul is in reveal to angels winging by." That line makes no sense to me. Is your soul in revel? Or is it revealed? *scratches head* It's only a tragedy after we bleed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eromyna ~ I suppose that line did sound rather obtuse. What I was trying to say is that one is an open book to the angels. They see everything. When you fly among the stars you cannot hide what is inside.  I have now changed the line so that I won't be having any more readers scratching their heads! lol I appreciate your comments and for drawing that to my attention! Fly high, happy and free!  EA  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
What a nice feel this has--like fresh air. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Linda Light!!!! Oh, dear lady, this imparts your spirit with the lovely words. Feel like an angel just hovered over my shoulders! KBHBLY.......lily jo The imaage is fabulous, too! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I breathe in the coolness of a late summer’s night, And meld with the heavens as my spirit takes flight." Sounds like you've been enjoying a porch of your own, Linda...  Nothing quite as relaxing on a "late summer's night", huh?? Very cool write, Linda!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, I know this feeling well and you've expressed it beautifully. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderfully done and very upliftingwwishing I could write like that! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful Linda. A feeling I get when going up in an ultralight airplane. :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Howdy, Pilgrim! I like you put that! I love fresh things!  Here are some fresh daisies for you!  Love & Fresh Light! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana ~ You are so sweet! You truly are! I love your enthusiasm and appreciation! Love & Light & a whole bunch of huggaroos! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Duncan ~ Yeppers! A porch can be the portal to the cosmos! Love & Starlights, Linda Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bunches of Honey ~ Thank you for saying so, Helen! It is always nice to here from you, from all the way down there in South Africa! Hugs and smiles from across the miles. Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
One Whose Shadows Are Passing ~ Thank ya kindly, Miss Dixie Chick! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
froggy ~ I didn't know that froggies could fly!?! lol The pond today, the skies tomorrow! It was good to hear from you, my pond ~ and sky! ~ friend! Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am right there with you, dear Linda! You know that this is totally after my heart. And even though your first version was a little bit criptic in that verse regarding the Angels, it's absolutely beautiful with your explanation. The definite version is of course perfect in any way. Can I dwell in this wonderful realm for a while? Enchanting write! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww, my Dearest Margherita ~ how I'd love for you to come fly with me unencumbered and free! Up, up and away! Lots of Love & Light, Linda |
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