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poe
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0 posted 2005-08-24 11:57 PM


Our lives are dangling by a rope
Sliding down a slippery slope
It could all end with one flick of the switch
I have realized this has to be a glitch
Yet it is still a fact
So the system has to be cracked
If we do not stand up for ourselves
They will decide amongst themselves
We are stumbling in the dark
Not even seeing a spark
No one wishing to turn on the light
Because they could not stand the fright
The pain and suffering spanning the earth
Mothers dying trying to give birth
They only thing they can say
Is let my baby be okay
Please do not let the dying's words go unheard
Acknowledge that this atrocity has occurred
Life is too great
For us too desecrate
We can not go silently in the night
A passion for each other we must ignite
Watching everything we ever cared about fade away
Stopping the pain we can no longer delay
Weapons were built to hurt
If we do not put them down our lives will revert
I look to the sky hoping for the way
We can not wait for tomorrow we need it today
They say the good die young
I would be the one if the song of peace was sung
The only thing we have are our words
If not for them we are no different then the birds
Starring at our own reflection in the mirror
Bring our demise even nearer
Unity is the only way it can work
If not in the dark the reaper will lurk
Our lives are in our hands
One voice from all the lands
We only have one shot at this existence
We must put up a resistance
Togetherness I encourage
Though I wonder if my life was the price would I still keep the courage
After thinking I know I would
If the world filled with good
It is truly worth the cost
So with this my being will never exhaust

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.



[This message has been edited by poe (08-25-2005 05:13 PM).]

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JesusChristPose
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Posts 777
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1 posted 2005-09-04 11:31 PM


I kind of felt a "rap" whle reading this... your ideas and intentions are noteworthy... the rhyme flowed and the images created were worth understanding.


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2 posted 2005-09-05 07:21 AM


we need to definetly open our eyes and and stop what were doing and get families back together and work together on the priorities  of life  or their will be no life  it scares me for the children this chaotic  no time  for family as prices are so high and materialistic has become more important than integrity virtures morals family  respect for all and this world  love and forgiveness  pull together end lonliness and shame  help clean up the damage from their drugs and alcohal that keep us from being as one and not seeing whats happening.  i bet some of you dont even know they can make it rain or create storms   and you believe what is told and shown on tv.   take a good look all around  we could be a disaster area too  and how many would help and how many would take advantage of situation and grab materialistic things instead of grabing and saving a life.  it scares the hell out of me

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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