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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-12-19 02:06 AM


#1 All the pretty flowers

I care not of the blossoms opening
I just want to hear
The echo of the loon near
While his feet kisses
The ripples, he almost misses

Even though cherry trees
Which don’t freeze, are rare and please…

#2 If you only knew me

I want you to know
I watch the sun set
And I know the way the sun
Reflects off the surface
Of subtle ripples

The way the trees
Will catch the light
And how I lay beneath
Counting the changing constellation

I hold most dear the sound
Of the incoming waves
For she is my mother
And I stand in silence

If I were a dove
I would embrace the
Grace of sacrifice

Never tell me again
I care for naught




Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

[This message has been edited by Juju (12-19-2005 07:14 PM).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-12-19 12:13 PM


SweetPoetess~

'I hold most dear the sound
Of the incoming waves
For she is my mother
And I stand in silence'


You brought memories of my own dear mother
cresting homeward to my heart~
She was (and still is) the gentle sound of the waves pounding on the shoreline of my heart~

Thank you for this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Gaia
2 posted 2005-12-19 06:50 PM


"I just want to hear
The echo of the loon near
While his feet kisses
The ripples, he almost misses"

smiling... I love this!

Huan Yi
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3 posted 2005-12-19 07:07 PM



This is good Juju

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