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The Edge Of September
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The Edge Of September |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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As though frozen in time this heart lies dormant awaiting the coming season of change… when life, in cycles rearranges Time found us there amidst the fall Hues of Autumn did not dare compare to the colors of you and I.. I could not look beyond this day for only time could see what these few precious moments would be. I in daze, yet awake still feel this dream how your brush stroked my soul in artistic touch your pallet held shades unknown to me and even now amber rays float down leaving slight touch of warm on pale of skin too long touched by winters kiss In glance, a gaze now turned towards heaven eyes wide open the blue of you stares back at me. The season’s splendor has shown its grace and I would linger in this special place knowing it would only make more difficult the journey back to an ice queens lair a palace void from shed of tears crystallized, frozen in time {echoes of when, heard in rhyme} to only glisten by sun kissed visions of remember I met you there at the edge of September when Autumn melted me within the colors of your fall. {written Feb 2005, reworked 8-23-05} yesterday is gone tomorrow doesn't exist |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestOne~ Oh ... the all of this is remarkable~  'how your brush stroked my soul in artistic touch your pallet held shades unknown to me' Your September Song *sighs* so beautifully~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I met you there at the edge of September when Autumn melted me within the colors of your fall." ~ Spectacular writing, Dear Donna!!!!!!!!! The entire poem! Hugs with love, Linda |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Bee-u-tee-full |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
a palace void from shed of tears crystallized, frozen in time {echoes of when, heard in rhyme} to only glisten by sun kissed visions of remember So very beautiful....every word....dear Donna. Hugs,  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Donna, this writing comes alive with imagery; much enjoyed. ....jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This particular write is very close to my heart, so I thank you ladies, each very much.  yesterday is gone |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very touching Donna.  and if I find time today maybe even inspiring..."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Susan, I hope you MAKE time. I am glad, if this inspires you. yesterday is gone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Donna, how (well, for lack of any other word) beautiful a fine write *sitting here shaking my head in awe of how you do it* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
real nice liked this touch of fall on an august morning |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just beautiful, Donna... M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
This is most certainly a fantastic write. Talent unveiled for me today. Thank you! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh Donna, this was written with much faith...a magnificent emotion of love and patience drips from your words, let alone, the questions you do not question, but more so, reval in that moment as the few gifts in life we are granted. Wonderful writing hun, with amazing heart. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is, by far, the best I have read from you besides it meaning more to ME than you shall ever realize, Donna. |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
amber rays float down leaving slight touch of warm on pale of skin too long touched by winters kiss Absolutely amazing. This deserves another read. http://www.mysticwicks.com |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Donna, i loved the way this just flowed beautifully down the page, just like autumn in leaf... Mxx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you do your name justice! hugsss you luv you |
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