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Hands and Body |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Feel the skin, Just the outer shell Flowing blood within around my soul Separate from what I consider me Hair that decorates and keeps me warm Singes when its burnt Fashion wood and a sword Raw weapons elemental Real on the surface Knock knock, slip And blood covers all Step out from under here Elements of the Earth See with your eyes Maturing Real Did you really feel that? Sick slip sucking open The heart, foul and black Let it tell you what to do This music inside you Body and hands in rising opera Beauty in kiss of soul touch God Let the night know... Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very strong poem....and interesting. Enjoyed. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
you know Craig, this reminded me of the mortal frailty which lies in each of us. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Itchy, I must confess that I have the need to scratch under my feathers whenever I see your name!  The closing stanza was especially appealing to this reader ~ "Body and hands in rising opera Beauty in kiss of soul touch God Let the night know..." Love & Light, EA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Powerful writing...very well said...*big hugs* |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
thank you illiana. littlewing- I didn't even think about that. Thank you for thinking about it. wow. EA- that sounds like something one from mystic shores of forevermore would say. Whats it like there? Are there RED_itchy_things there? lol. God bless. Thank you startime. Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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