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ctowen
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0 posted 2005-08-20 11:12 PM


    

Did I leave the water on ....

leaky hydrants
rampant streams
clouds bursting
drowning dreams

droplets build
puddles lake
falling over
mistakes I make

such power,
such surge
I question ...
where will I
immerge


did I leave the water on?



A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

              

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Gaia
1 posted 2005-08-20 11:24 PM


now that...is a lotta water under the bridge!
ctowen
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2 posted 2005-08-20 11:28 PM


I agree .....

but still run home wondering   lol

        was inspired by your water flow ...


  CT

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2005-08-22 01:25 PM


I question ...
where will I
immerge''''


~

betting you already know....hugsss you...

~~**~~
You're so vain
you probably think this
song is about you (CS)
~~**~~

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