How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » i most certainly do
Open Poetry #36
Post A Reply Post New Topic i most certainly do Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Copperbell
Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956
0 posted 2005-08-17 10:12 AM

Your heart breathes before me
Quavering and fearful
A petal unfolds

O but the slightest thought
of ridicule
Drops the gate

And hiding tight you hold yourself
in fearful arms
Wildly hoping

that I might have liked
what you let me see

and i most certainly do

He is so fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose - Jim Elliot
© Copyright 2005 Copperbell - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2005-08-17 10:20 AM


nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-08-17 10:40 AM

your words left me smiling



M
Larry C
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
3 posted 2005-08-17 01:18 PM

Yup, it's nice.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
4 posted 2005-08-17 01:23 PM

smiling here too
Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
5 posted 2005-08-17 04:00 PM

Awesome !!
Enjoyed.  Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg
Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
6 posted 2005-08-17 05:01 PM

But they never know and if they do, often never believe

Bodger
Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
7 posted 2005-08-17 05:05 PM

This delightful poem couldn't help but bring a smile to my face...I love it...*hugs*
vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
8 posted 2005-08-17 05:05 PM

good read
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
9 posted 2005-08-17 05:28 PM

.......Much enjoyed!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
10 posted 2005-08-17 06:03 PM

awesome write!
Copperbell
Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956
11 posted 2005-08-17 08:27 PM

thank you
nn
Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75
12 posted 2005-08-18 04:59 AM

This is perfect! Beautiful!

It means something to me, I can relate to it. And it was said in such a wonderful, perfect way!

Congratulations
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
13 posted 2005-08-18 07:26 AM

Adorable! Shy

To love and loving!
EA
Copperbell
Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956
14 posted 2005-08-18 08:34 PM

I really appreciate everyone's response.  Thank you.

nn - I'm glad it means something to you
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #36 » i most certainly do

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary