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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Signal Themes And so, it was…. moody yesterday…chocks words! breathing hard…out of prejudiced agreement yes, imperfect with untrained eyes, mocked..belittled deliberately dressed up with violation however, a lace of white supposes fix determined half blooded author, sorting hats wizarding powerful little something’s where interior distinctions require physical exertion, sometimes hard... ya know, they almost flew...those little something’s that people insist on giving...gentle into some good night, where wolfs eyes become the other side of love... there’s a place which speaks, with the dead in deep breath and a wand pointed at lonesome love to defend swans without fear without half seasons, in a mind’s eye and there, outside of time, a crown of North gives silver threads to dreams and delusions even in humiliating things, standing under the shadows of trees... with desire to inflict a robin’s promise~ bonds by which the world wills... through grape crops and stroking psyches spurring the ribs of unflinching candor with silent lyrical bullion...stoic unconscious which escapes one’s notice perhaps misshapen perhaps only in slight gesture faintly misguided but entirely with cerulean rose yes, in mundane garnets soaked where a garden stretches between abutting thick folds of multiple sensations call it, a rally cry of white reserve straightforward...of that you can bet bringing closer the grail bird escaping constraints stern burlesque of humanism resurrecting moving water a manic energy shuttles, between two extremes giving matter and memory, an instance, a pulse a breezy pun, if you will, even if, blond in theme arising in one particle of myriad fates wispy cosmic pledging allegiance fledglings of free verse willfully [This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-06-2005 08:14 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ya know, they almost flew...those little something’s that people insist on giving...gentle into some good night, where wolfs eyes become the other side of love... wow, this grabbed me Lee, I enjoyed this. Do Not Go Gentle is one of my favorite poems too. Hugs hon. Give me your heart |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ "ya know, they almost flew...those little something’s that people insist on giving...gentle into some good night, where wolfs eyes become the other side of love..." ~ "and there, outside of time, a crown of North gives silver threads to dreams and delusions even in humiliating things, standing under the shadows of trees..." ~ "but entirely with cerulean rose yes, in mundane garnets soaked where a garden stretches between abutting thick folds of multiple sensations" ~ "a breezy pun, if you will, even if, blond in theme" ********** A fine writer ye be, Lovely Lee! I know it is a shame for me to separate the above lines from the rest of this masterful write, but for me, they were the cream of of a very fine poetic crop of words! Loving hugs, Linda May your day be brimming with good things! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ All this right under my very nose. LOL Good morning sweet  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ya know, they almost flew...those little something’s that people insist on giving...gentle into some good night, where wolfs eyes become the other side of love... ~*~ Dang.... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
You've written another masterpiece, LeeJ! Sorry - another AMAZING masterpiece! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
i love tumbling through your words and imagery - such a ride  hugs -  Susan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...wow! can't pick a favorite verse |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Words written that seem to the naked eye haphazard...but with you i look again and veils lift...thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I must cross my eyes when I read poems such as this...to mine the gold of their meaning. When I read this I saw a "rage against the dying of the light." All the stanzas are written well, and it can be told that they are well thought out, in perfect alignment, one leading into the next- A train of thought, the engine (title) pulling the reader along until the end, never jumping the track. enjoyed the ride ------------ice/ford |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this one alot. I like \ "gentle into some good night, where wolfs eyes become the other side of love..." It stuck out. I kinda like the poem with in a poem. I like this one alot. Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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