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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2005-07-06 01:25 AM



Move on from a previous experience
move on to where there is another
to replace the college one
or the one tinted in taboo
far from a sex ed class


Move on to another experience
one with another
one with oneself first
show ones true colours in a storm
the wind howls madly
the spirit sooths ubrupt thoughts
all in passing
move on...


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2005-07-06 05:36 AM


good advice Martin
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-07-06 08:22 AM


this says a mouthful and more

couldn't help but think, in times like these, a botox of the heart shot would be of great value...hugs

froggy
Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2005-07-18 11:35 AM


Excellent advice Martin.
Alot of people need to move on,quit living in the moment as many do these days.

Well done my friend.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16
Posts 199
NY, USA
4 posted 2005-07-18 02:39 PM


Well said, nicely done!!
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