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Wind
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0 posted 2005-08-12 10:01 PM



Sometimes, I fear
that I only dream I'm dreaming.
And it's then my walls lose their purity,
and my mind's a flamingo-pink hell.

Sometimes, I fear
I only imagine I'm imagining.
Because these lies are open sores,
and they taste like plastic when I speak.

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Liz, just dropping in after like...two years.
Well, I got nostalgic or something. I let the nostalgia consume, or, yeah, whatever.
Well, I probably won't start posting again, but sometimes you want to visit the place you started.

© Copyright 2005 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-08-12 10:06 PM


and I fear I am only dreaming...

JUST DROPPING IN?

oh lady, have you made my night!

*squeezing you so hard yer ribs hurt*

Don't go away again.

I have missed you my friend.

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2 posted 2005-08-12 10:08 PM


and okay. Sheesh. Sorry.

I DID read the poem, and this is the bit of grit I missed from you, my little sister:

"Because these lies are open sores,
and they taste like plastic when I speak."

sighing

thank you

I could just cry.


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3 posted 2005-08-12 10:08 PM


oh, but sadly, tis indeed just a dropin.
in all reality, I just wanted everyone to know I didn't die.

though I'd also like to exterminate my user picture XD

love ya serenity. don't have a heart attack on me

>_>

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4 posted 2005-08-12 10:09 PM


"don't have a heart attack on me."



We shouldn't taunt the fates, here.

We both know how my life writes out.


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5 posted 2005-08-12 10:11 PM


what is it with this place? no new members, and slower than ever!

times sure have changed, eh?

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6 posted 2005-08-12 10:29 PM


Well, I'll be.......
How ya been kiddo???

OK, going to read your poem now, just wanted to make sure I wasn't hallucinating...  

BTW...congratulate yourself, you've now done what I swore noone could.

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7 posted 2005-08-12 10:32 PM


what? I swear wha-you old fart.
Why are you talking bout, weirdo? *hugs*

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8 posted 2005-08-12 10:33 PM


"and my mind's a flamingo-pink hell."

I am just lovin' this WAY too much...  


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9 posted 2005-08-12 10:37 PM


Old fart??????  Why, why........I never.  (Oh yeah, maybe I have...)
  
Hey, who left breadcrumbs for Liz???  We thought the dingo's atecha kiddo!!!!

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10 posted 2005-08-12 10:40 PM


>_>
if I still have to be 'kiddo' you're definately an old fart. so there.

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11 posted 2005-08-12 10:47 PM


I prefer "finely aged gaseous emmision".
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12 posted 2005-08-12 10:48 PM


i prefer 'young but not infantile carbon-based life form'
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13 posted 2005-08-12 10:49 PM


serenity interjects:

neener-neener-neener?

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14 posted 2005-08-12 10:50 PM


oh, now you've done it!
i veto your 'neener.' have a nice day.

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15 posted 2005-08-13 08:57 PM


Well, there she is again!!
Helloooooo Liz!!!
Love ya,
Ethel

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