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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-03-17 12:15 PM


and the breeze
the breeze will look at the river
as if it wanted to be one with it
and dance across it
like the world meant nothing
nothing but that.
but the breeze
oh the breeze
it knew better than to trust the river
it knew better than to love the river
for the river
oh the river
changes
it never stops moving
it never stops flowing
leaving the world behind
at every turn
it lives a solitude life
yet is never alone.
so,
for the foolish breeze
to love the unconstrained river
is a bird loving a fish.


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-17 07:54 AM


heartbreaking reality...well done
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