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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-03-15 08:17 AM

Bind me not, unto thy heart,
If thou love, love only but me,
for soft lips, speak words to part,
the depths of my souls red sea,

Upon thy deep eyes, only do look,
heart be filled with loves content,
feasting upon my minds open book,
your mind, I tease with elusive bewilderment,

Devotedly give, unto me, me only,
thy words of warm comfort and love,
be with me, never shall ye be lonely,
only thoughts of me, thereof,

Kiss only these sweet lips of crimson,
allowing hearts tongue to taste kisses succulent,
our bodies move, our hearts beat in unision,
Tasting my passion, kisses become complete ravishment,

Love me, only me,
unto my heart, only give,
this be, Thy Ladys heartfelt plea,
Inside your heart, may she, forever live~

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-03-15 09:05 AM

beautifully written and felt

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-03-15 07:21 PM

My Dear Crimson Lady,

It shall be known that a heartfelt plea as this, could never miss its target...

Yes, I am bewildered, for such beautiful, satin soft words I have not heard for a long time...and they flow as the gentlest brook into the cavern of my heart.

I love the whole poem - it's beautifully done, but I particularly like the first quatrain.
Its flow and rhythm...are magic.

Thank you.

Love,
Your Knight
CastleGuard

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2005-03-15 08:05 PM

As usual...lovely my friend.

jwesley

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2005-03-15 10:19 PM

~LeeJ....You write so well, and when you reply to my poetry, I am so humbled by knowing you like my poetry!
thank You!

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-03-15 10:28 PM

~My Dearest Arthur,

Flowing into the deepest caverns of your heart is where I want to be,You sir, are so talented, with perfection, how can I be half the poet you are....and to have your heart, your words for me....a queen I feel that I am, one of land and sea.

So glad the target was not missed~

For it is your love, your words flowing out of my heart unto these pages, your poetry is magic....

My Heart You have~
Love
Thy Fiery Lady

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-03-15 10:30 PM

Jwesly Thank You, for every comment means alot to me!

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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