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time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2005-03-15 06:23 AM




Whispered the wings
On air.
A'fore dropping
The abyss,
Betwynan lair
And ocean.
Such
The gannets flair.
Wind walking,
Sliding
Ocean currents,
Stalking,
Consumate fisher
Without peer.
Beauty,
Beyond compare.



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-03-15 06:43 AM


yes, indeed beauty beyond compare...which you have so effectively painted words to a wonderful picture.  Very much enjoyed.
time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees
2 posted 2005-03-15 06:53 AM


Thank you LeeJ, took all day and several rolls of film to catch this one, it had to have words.
Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-03-15 08:48 AM


And you did an excellent job
with both talents, Sir!

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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-03-15 09:35 AM


Oh my goodness....this is wonderful !
thankyou for sharing. hugs, Chris

"Nunc scio quit sit amor."
~ Virgil

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