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the fall. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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if i walked into you on the street would we kiss would we hug or our we strangers lost in ourselves we try so hard to be safe we don't breathe anymore we pretend we do though let's close our eyes like we used to in the fall when the only things that mattered were the leaves and us when we used to dance without music and sing without a tune but it didnt matter we weren't closed off we were in love and |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I like the way you write, just simple and true~(with raw emotions) ~ARh "Let me not to the marriage of true minds Admit impediments; love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
i agree simple and true, and very honest enjoyed  New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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sweetpoetess Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428Florida |
Very beautiful write. Poetry is beauty in words. |
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