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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Stoical to my grievous heart, i will again fill with burgeoning passion. Ghost white mornings of mist ascending like my love, to ochre nebulous orb of sun. Rising to this life, of rejection, on with truth, rectitude, munificence, forward to beauteousness. Yahweh alone knows the burden upon me. Darkness hides tears of an echoing abandoned soul. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I find your presentation interesting especially the line breaks, But I like the expression Most notably at the end. Gloom |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
It does not surprise me that you like the end, but then words are capable of great deception. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Rising to this life, of rejection, on with truth, rectitude, munificence, forward to beauteousness. Yes - rise and reclaim - fill those ghost white mornings - I like the sense of hope in this - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This has depth and great emotion. Who could ask for more? Certainly not me. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
GR, great deception, indeed, I agree good write, much enjoyed, deeply understood |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you all for your replies... Dixie..yes subterfuge within words is easy..special thanks to you .... Goldenrose Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Phil I felt much pain and sorrow as I read your heartfelt words. Love will come again when you least expect it. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Rose of Gold, you have a heart of gold as well. I could deeply sense your solitude ~ but you surely will not be flying solo for long. You have so much love to give to some fortunate woman. Sending you a warm hug, EA |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sue, Linda... thank you for your replies...to the future and beauty i now look to... Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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