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Open Poetry #35

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-03-11 06:55 PM

So Much More

I don't know what
my problem is...

My honey gives
me plenty, but
I always want
more.

Well, perhaps that
could be looked at
as a problem or as
a blessing.

I'm thankful
for this woman
that I adore,

this woman that
always leaves me
wanting, desiring
so much more.

JamesLee
March10
2005

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

1 posted 2005-03-11 09:27 PM

This was beautiful, James! And yes...it is a blessing to always want more of your mate...too bad I can't find one that feels this way about me.

Great write!

Becka

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2005-03-11 09:31 PM

I like your turn-around thinking here--the logic about a longing desire as being a good thing. Nice reflection!

sadie

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-03-12 12:16 PM

how cute
S2 X S2

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2005-03-12 12:28 PM

less is more then, isn't it?

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