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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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I lie in ruin broken . . . shattered scattered across these amber spill sheets like cooled glass . . .fractured by the press of your blazing heat this ecstasy— I can bear no more “Cataclysmic” you rock my world— shifting my rifts until I come unglued but mere pieces fallen from the whole my fragile bare and exposed sing to me now, my star shine love in tender tenor tones let your gentle cover my undone gather my given in your arms of strength meld me into the haven of your warm embrace and hold me tightly . . . bound until my seams redeem their splitting soothe me with your soft love sighs ‘til the tears of our heaven dry from my eyes and I return to this earth I know keep me until once again I become . . . whole s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whew, Susan, this is sensational...vibrant, alive and uninhibited...what a read... thank you for sharing |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ This is as lovely a penning as I'll read this day~ There is a magical quality to this piece that simply sings me home~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
susin.. this kind of fragile with handles just makes it dinner time and I am famished now come dance with me mon amour |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
LeeJ - thank you my friend - you warm me Marge - you're loverly is most kind D - your acceptance and tender is a warm blanket - snuggly - Love you all - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
gather my given in your arms of strength meld me into the haven of your warm embrace and hold me tightly . . . bound until my seams redeem their splitting Yes... exactly this. *S* This is beautiful, Susan... I love the images! *S* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you dear Suthern - hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, you are one helluva fine poetessa. Gosh, I am such a fan of your writing! I truly am! This was downright beauteous! I read it out loud three times! It was lyrical and full of woman magic.  Loveya! Linda |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
Susan ~~~ WOW is all that comes to mind. Excellent write. Dara Beth If life hands you a lemon... see if you can trade it for an orange or banana. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
x.,dcnnehtgg ccnnx x ...erhn ccccc oops, scrambled fingers...sheesh, but WOW!!!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Linda - you smile me, and I blush - what a kind compliment - thank you deeply my friend Dara Beth - thank you so much for your WOW - most kind Barry - *grin* you delight me dear Sir - thank you and hugs! S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Just got your style written all over it here Susan, beautiful and gentle..love the aliteration too..thank you. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you my friend - guess alliteration is a true enjoyment for me - I find myself slipping into it often - most kind . . .  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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