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It Wasn't |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It Wasn’t It wasn’t in the month of May But walking in the park one day I watched the dewdrops catch lights flair And disappear into the air The air was pregnant with this gist And forming there a rainbows mist That spread its colors in an arc And made an arch above the park It turned the park to wonders awe With floating fog upon the floor And in the fog stood giant trees With leaves that danced the slightest breeze I swore I was in Eden’s land Or even dreams of Samarkand The vision was so pure to me It’s all my eyes could read or see And in the moment of the lend I thought I reached my final end |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Is this true? What a sight...and story to share...thank you dear Sy...Good Good Morning  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ As true as a dream can be. Good morning sweety. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! 'Twould be a rapturous end, indeed! I wish that for all of us! As per usual, I enjoyed your morning's poetic offering! May we dream as sweet, Until we, Our Maker, meet!  Loveya! EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It does sound like Heaven, this place you describe. How lovely it must be to have such dreams. Time for tea? Good...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~  ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Wide awake, or dreaming....such a vision this frozen morning Thank you ~P |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think what it was, is that you are not only taking time to smell the roses, but paint the rainbows, too... You're such a treasure to us all, dear Sy!    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel And you are an insperation to me.  Nancy Mornings hugs and tea That's for me. choshi Thank you my friend. Sunshine If not for you what would the flowers do. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply beautiful Seymour !! hugs for this, Chris  "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Hugs and back |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you had me frightened for a minute there I knew you were on this morning because I saw your reply to mine, but I couldn't find yours... whew! I found it! I knew it was here! I would have been upset if it wasn't. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Never fear you are with me always. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I watched the dewdrops catch lights flair And disappear into the air The air was pregnant with this gist And forming there a rainbows mist That spread its colors in an arc And made an arch above the park It turned the park to wonders awe With floating fog upon the floor And in the fog stood giant trees With leaves that danced the slightest breeze ========================== you are the rhyme behind the rainbow's brilliant bend ... you are the pot of cadenced gold found at evermore's end. *ww*    one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... ~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, My wish is for you to stay well and happy. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You strolled through Eden... and took us all along with your words. *S* Beautiful work! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
well, this brought to me a memory that is confusing, me as child, hiding and singing i was strolling through the park one day, in the merry merry month of may. oh well, always a pleasure to read your words, sir My spirit will rise |
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