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RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2005-03-08 07:48 PM

I am nothingness, without somethingness,
nor living, but living nonetheless-
You'd fine most like myself behind closed (padded) doors
Labelled insane by the superior crowds,
You do not exist to me the one i thought in mind;
For i never had a "you" to begin with.

Poetry finds inself into the veins of victims,
A whole new world awaits behind the lines-
Spot my falseness within each made up verse
Shall i speak of dreams never experinced,
What i wish to see, or hear, or seemingly;
"Insanina" no cure but the common world.

Let me breathe like everyone else we have no cause,
But love to me is all i wish upon myself-
Before my time a little piece of tender love and care
not from a parent, but from another who knows not of "i",
Lets tell a freind what we can get time and time again;
Never think of those that never had a first-
Leaving the ones they like to dislike them in hatred
for the male kind never will i find the love i wish i had.

"insanina" kill all the males that cheat on every female,
Least at least i'll find a love for something other than myself-
a common goal in life, "lonely is my own living hell
set me free or give me what i pine for,
a way to live and survive with a little tender love and care;
who does want to be alone those who ain't "who cares".

sweetpoetess
Member

since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

1 posted 2005-03-09 03:37 PM

Interesting read

Poetry is beauty in words.

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-03-09 03:45 PM

I really like this!!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-03-09 04:05 PM

Lee, your words reached in and grabbed my solar plexus and plucked at my harp strings.

I really felt your words and I was overcome with the urge to give you a loving, comforting hug.

Your writing, whether it be based on reality or fantasy, cannot but help touch your readers. You lay yourself bare ~ the true measure of a poet.

I truly wish that your fantasy girl becomes your reality and that she is deserving of all the love that you have inside you to give.

God bless you!

Hugs with love,
EA

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