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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
If spoken word of today were in yesterdays of past Proclaimed in words I want to say I surely would have laughed If story told in passing in moons that beamed before Exspressive in our passion I would have smiled more But if this tale were woven then there wouldn't be a tear in knowig that forever more I'll never hold you near |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very much enjoyed. Chris "Nunc scio quit sit amor." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
A beautiful "if" Truly enjoyed reading your thoughts. sadie |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully expressed....heart breakingly true sometimes |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Lovely meter in this one. And it made me smile, sadly. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful bittersweet write.. Much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Thanks for all the comments. It's been over a year that I have written anything... I was a bit nervous to come back.. : ) ~~Connie~~ |
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