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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-03-07 07:17 AM


The Wring

Each bead drops down upon the string
A sling that echoes prayers in wring
A sense of flight to right a wrong
The tethers of a minds sarong

An askance from a deity
To right a wrong that seems to be
An askance wove of human lace
To right a wrong that seems the case

The case is not the deity
The case is more a want to be
Desire of a human kind
Illusions of a human mind

A string and beads to sew a space
To weave a cloth of human grace
To sweeten times epiphany
And straighten out eternity

How presumptuous I would say
We would the world another way


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-03-07 07:53 AM


The case is not the deity
The case is more a want to be
Desire of a human kind
Illusions of a human mind


you are a wizard and reading my mind again...."Stop it"  hehee

Tremendous and Good morning sir...


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2 posted 2005-03-07 08:22 AM


To sweeten times epiphany
And straighten out eternity

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if words but could....yours would.

How presumptuous I would say
We would the world another way


Poets wend the world with words in play...
I wouldnt have it any other way.


*ww*

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-03-07 08:24 AM


Good morning, Sir Wise Sigh! You have a talent extraordinaire ~ and a mind to match.

Fortunate be we with whom your share this gift.

Have a glorious day!

Angel morning hugs 'n kisses,
EA


NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2005-03-07 08:49 AM


Good Morning Sir Sy:  A dellightful read as always. The sun is shining brighly here in the North Country and it is good to share this morning with you.

Thanks for always being here ... you and your works of imagination are a welcome sight first thing.

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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5 posted 2005-03-07 08:56 AM


Have I told you that your writings are amazing? No? Well they are!! Rainy Ontario morning hugs to you. Chris
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-03-07 08:56 AM


LeeJ
You are a delight, good morning.

JM,
Well if you wouldn't have it any other way,
Your stuck. LOL Winkiewinkie


Earth Angel
How would I get through the day with out a hug and kiss from you?

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-03-07 09:02 AM


Marti,
Glad you are having some sun today and you make me happy with your wonderful comments.

Chris,
Its rainy there cause you sent the sun to me.


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8 posted 2005-03-07 05:57 PM


good day sir   a day without you would be a day without a smile

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-03-07 06:39 PM


MGROVES
Thank you my friend.

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