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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-03-06 08:41 AM



There is little left, nothing tangible
but voiceless words, no memorabilia
to touch, to finger and know
that it was real.

It was as if a fire
had burned everything
and nothing...

Left with the door ajar,
the remaining thoughts slipping through
until they are no more.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2005-03-06 08:52 AM


You touched me with this write M...very deep and heartfelt, as you are.
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2005-03-06 09:01 AM


good morning M

*hugging you*

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519

3 posted 2005-03-06 09:02 AM


as always i enjoy the heart of your thought;
it is touching...
          sadie

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
4 posted 2005-03-06 06:37 PM


Very nice!
SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2005-03-06 08:17 PM


Hang in there, my friend. Things will get better.
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2005-03-06 11:35 PM


comes down like  a  thud sometimes
as if all the beatuty was just siphoned out of it
ugh.....
i hear you

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2005-03-13 08:36 AM


My words to you..from my heart...

thanking all
M

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