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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2005-03-05 11:57 PM

There are times
when the thought of you
will hold me
completely
enrapture
enfold me
so all that I know
in that moment
is you...

I close my eyes
breathe you into me
taste you in my soul
and the sound of my exhale
is the whisper
of your voice

there,
behind the sigh
before my eyes can open,
readjust to here and now
I see your smile
and I am reminded
once again

how much I love you....

~SEA~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-03-06 12:00 PM

"there,
behind the sigh
before my eyes can open,
readjust to here and now
I see your smile
and I am reminded
once again

how much I love you...."

Exquisite, beautful, heartfelt words Susan.
Very much enjoyed!!
Hugs pretty lady~

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2005-03-06 12:07 PM

and the sound of my exhale
is the whisper
of your voice

Totally beautiful poem, but these phrases really spoke to me! A pleasure to read,
~sadie~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2005-03-06 12:54 PM

awww Susan, this is just beautiful, I know those times, I do . . . *smiling at you*

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2005-03-06 01:01 AM

I close my eyes
breathe you into me
taste you in my soul
and the sound of my exhale
is the whisper
of your voice

there,
behind the sigh
before my eyes can open,
readjust to here and now
I see your smile
and I am reminded
once again

how much I love you....

Smiling at you Susan because I do this everyday.
You expressed this feeling beautifully.

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-03-06 09:11 AM

SEA, this is beautiful.
hugs, Chris

Love can sometimes be magic. But magic can sometimes... just be an illusion.
~ Javan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-03-06 09:36 AM

I know that feeling

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2005-03-06 10:33 AM

How beautiful this is SEA...a pleasure to read and re-read.
TD

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2005-03-06 10:37 AM

perfection..... : )

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

9 posted 2005-03-06 11:53 AM

sweat.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-03-06 02:38 PM

a lovely exhale - *sigh* -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2005-03-06 04:47 PM

liked this

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

12 posted 2005-03-06 08:20 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Sea!

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

13 posted 2005-03-06 08:36 PM

WOW....VERY NICE, Susan!!

Becka

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

14 posted 2005-03-07 06:23 AM

Lovely

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

15 posted 2005-04-19 12:37 PM

I just wanted to say thank you for the wonderful replies...sorry I didn't sooner!

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