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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2005-03-05 06:18 AM


Might I drift in dreams
Float in flowered water of spring
Travel where ever goes the river;
Would it take me far
To the land where beauty sings
As they dip into the water.
Might not some lady
With soft skin the color of milk
And long dark braided hair,
Would she on shore
Sit with me in her dress of silk
Taking time enough to share
Till I wake
At daybreak.

Gloom
Inspired by a poem from
Liu Zongyuan, a poet of China, T’ang Dynasty




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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-03-05 08:12 AM



I see the picture in this,
and it is indeed
a lovely dream.

miscellanea
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OH
2 posted 2005-03-05 08:12 AM


Lovely, A.D.  Your Chinese inspired poetry tends to slip off one's tongue beautifully. The imagery, peaceful, serene...

               miscellanea

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-03-05 08:40 AM


Professor,
It worked then and will work now. Enjoyed

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2005-03-05 09:19 AM




gave me warm fuzzies Gloomy!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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5 posted 2005-03-05 11:47 AM


lovely

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

SEA
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with you
6 posted 2005-03-05 11:47 PM


this is so soft..or mabye tender is what i mean...I like this very much  
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-03-05 11:50 PM


A joy to read...James
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
8 posted 2005-03-08 07:33 AM


beautiful dreams~

~ARh

We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard


LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-03-08 07:36 AM


ohhhh, I know she would be honored

What a beautiful picture you've painted here....gloriously visual

Morning

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