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Nightmares By The Sea
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Nightmares By The Sea |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I am alive tonight, wrapped in bloody sheets a menstrual poison Bathed in a wreckage of moonlight and limbs She is full, at least she was the last time you looked and he ignored you. I am tired, unable to sleep you away Out and away sing my sorrows to sleep. I miss you, like that... The way you showed me the moon and all her friends how you could have waved and sure as hell she would have waved back Sure as hell from the belly up You were beauty, and still I am nothing but sure I would still wave back and beyond skies. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Whoa...loved this, and your beautiful picture... this rocked and then some, though heartwrenching....makes the reader climb inside that woman of all of us... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gem, The way you showed me the moon and all her friends I adore this line, your writing has grown much deeper, the picture is beautiful! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I miss you, like that... The way you showed me the moon and all her friends how you could have waved and sure as hell she would have waved back" ~*~ "You were beauty, and still I am nothing but sure I would still wave back and beyond skies." very cool write, and yep, really pretty picture of you!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another outstanding write love your new pic too |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey there pretty ladee, where ya bin? this..... I am alive tonight, wrapped in bloody sheets a menstrual poison Bathed in a wreckage of moonlight and limbs She is full, ...Rocks! You Rock! and you pic? swoon  and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow this poem is just amazing. I just love your writing it is filled with such intense emotions and incredible imagery and this was no exception. Great work. Andrew |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 wonderful Gemma! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
stark imagery, enjoyed this very much New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
stark imagery, enjoyed this very much New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
wishing you, sweet one, better days and brighter night skies ... ....  (blushing) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Scent of sweet aromatherapy, lavendar, sent your way tonight, with a nod of knowing. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
finally, a post..now if we could get that journal entry up and running all would be perfect. pbllllllllt and hugs |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
each of your replies made me smile, so thankyou for them, so much. Sorry If i seem ignorant, I cant reply or read and reply often, internet connection here at uni is ridiculous amounts of money, and have to spend any money i have for internet for doing research. But today I'm treating myself! Thankyou again, for reading and such warm replies.  |
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