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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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0 posted 2005-02-14 05:16 PM


The Air That I Breathe

I live to
make this
world the
place you
want it
to be.

Tell me,
angel in
my eye,
has there
ever been
anyone that
takes care
of you as
well as I.


JamesLee
Feb12
2005
"One must cherish life
and live it to its end.
That is a mans duty."
from the movie...
Samurai Fiction

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with you
1 posted 2005-02-14 06:01 PM


well I bet there isn't one that would take better care of her...
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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2 posted 2005-02-14 08:12 PM


Beautiful words
and beautiful read

:-)

Red Dreams
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since 2005-01-09
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massachusetts
3 posted 2005-02-14 08:24 PM


fantastic!
It dances in my mind<3

Laoha
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since 2003-03-07
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Nevada, USA
4 posted 2005-05-20 10:33 PM


true

LAOHA'S PEN


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-05-21 06:02 AM


nicely done
Susan
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6 posted 2005-05-21 11:11 AM


ah, you pulled me in with the title of one of my favorite songs and then kept me with your song of heart -

much enjoyed -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2005-05-21 06:11 PM


James, you are true romance!

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

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