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A Saunas Heat
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A Saunas Heat |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Saunas Heat I see your face with tips of Braille The saunas heat of lips avail Rushing through illusions prime Racing in the race of time This flower of a moment’s glow The power of a moment’s sew Yet know in time that thorns will bear But in my love I do not care There is a force that leads me on It stays with me and never gone It strums the strings within my heart Hypnotic is the songs impart It leads me o’er a rainbows path And washes me a rainbows bath An epic in a times mirage The body of a life’s corsage My fingers read in Braille your face And sink in thoughts below the lace |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write this morning Sy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You say sauna, I say steamy!    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Sleep well. Sunshine, LOL Each to his own.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I luv the "force" and your poetry, Sy. Enjoy the day. miscellanea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miscellanea Thank you so much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see your face with tips of Braille The saunas heat of lips avail Rushing through illusions prime Racing in the race of time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ There is a force that leads me on It stays with me and never gone It strums the strings within my heart Hypnotic is the songs impart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sy-babers....I do so love your "touchless touch"   An epic in a times mirage The body of a life’s corsage and those lines are cooler than even I can say. LOL ... what awesome personify and symbolism. You are our epically inspired poet who wears a cadenced carnation. *S* *ww*  one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
There is a force that leads me on It stays with me and never gone It strums the strings within my heart Hypnotic is the songs impart as are your words...lovely morning song |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "My fingers read in Braille your face And sink in thoughts below the lace" Smiling at this! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was absolutely beautiful, Sir Sigh! You are as delightful as your poetry! May love forever strum the strings of your poetic heart! Love & Light, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And I do so love your words that touch. You are the wrap on the vibraphone sticks That plays on my heart with magical licks LeeJ Thank you sweety Martie I smile at your smile. Earth Angel Its so nice to have an Angel in your corner. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yet know in time that thorns will bear But in my love I do not care There is a force that leads me on It stays with me and never gone This is one of my favorites, Seymour... it's absolutely beautiful! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Aand so are you. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow! Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lost Dreamer Thanks for the WOW |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Seymour!! So much enjoyed. Big hugs.  ~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thanks for the hug. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
another great one sir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES And another thank you. |
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