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ecrivan
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0 posted 2005-03-01 12:19 PM



He said
He said, she said
she said he did
did what?!!!


When it was all said and done
said and done again
he continued to say
she continued to say he did
did what? you say...

somebody's bound to tune out
the complexity of the interchange
doesn't promote spiritual growth
peace of mind
it satisfies the vanity of idle talk.

But how I have talked in vain myself
I am the subject of what was said
entrapped in amber from a resin's drip
each drip another statement said
statements imbibed in juicy gossip
all for what he said.




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1 posted 2005-03-01 12:36 PM


ack!! now I wonder, what did he say?


ecrivan
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2 posted 2005-03-02 12:31 PM


Hey, the story is never ending..hehe


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3 posted 2005-03-02 01:18 AM


That's why they tune in every day Martin, to hear what s(he)said or did (or didn't do or say). LOL. It's a never-ending tale, but everyone wants to be there for the ending.
Enjoyed these amber drops.

ecrivan
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4 posted 2005-03-02 01:30 AM


so true, apart from the Happy Endings..


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5 posted 2005-03-02 01:40 AM


This is so true of my life at the moment - makes becoming a hermit a worthwhile goal!  Nice read!
ecrivan
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6 posted 2005-03-02 01:47 AM


I just got slashed for gossip myself but not without a back slash...Like yourself it's a lesson on who one can relate to and how


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7 posted 2005-03-02 12:34 PM


I don't have enough details yet...LOL Awesome

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.



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8 posted 2005-03-02 12:58 PM


Great write!

Eric

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9 posted 2005-03-03 08:17 PM


LOL, this one must be read by more.
and you DO know why

ecrivan
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10 posted 2005-03-04 01:13 AM


Midnite,

You UNDERSTAND then, neat of me to write this after the one on who cares how many people click in...


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