you are the black bird and I am the seagull

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Open Poetry #35

you are the black bird and I am the seagull

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2005-02-28 06:14 PM

The way the sky looks it seems we should be ten minutes from the beach.
Palm trees and residential hell.
Don't cheat yourself out of a good time, don't lock yourself inside.
Come lay on our brightly colored towels and listen to eighties music.
Ice tea and cigerettes.
The beach is five hours from here.
But there's something else just over the hill.
We stand on one leg and stick our tonugues out at each other.
Were not as grown up as we pretend to be my love.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-02-28 06:24 PM

LOL, residential helll...as is typical in southern California, where I grew up

Hmmm, time to stop squabbling and go watch the surf, eh?

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-02-28 08:17 PM

Five hours, huh....it takes me an hour to get to the closest beach...but sometimes you can pretend, out in the sun with a towel and some kind of water, can't you? Enjoyed!

Opoetry4me
Member

since 2002-10-11

Posts 126
Dixon, Ky USA

3 posted 2005-02-28 08:23 PM

LOL, This was a very cute piece.

I enjoyed!

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

4 posted 2005-03-01 12:08 PM

the most relaxing and peaceful place on the earth.....is the beach--tends to make its own realities and distortions at times. enjoyed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-03-01 06:49 PM

Enjoyed...James

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