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Open Poetry #35

sandpaper and silk

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-02-27 05:27 PM

It's such an intensely
sensual feeling...

the way gorgeous golden words of passionate love
smooth over the roughest spots,
like silken threads dangling over the edges
of the blue gown of daily life

~sheer-as-gossamer~
~lighter than hummingbird down~

yet equally intensely felt
are those bursts of passionate anger...

the sandpaper
that scrapes raw
all the exposed silk surfaces.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-02-27 05:32 PM

Wondeful Kacy - I like the contrast

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2005-02-27 05:39 PM

Love this! Wonderful contrast!

miscellanea

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-02-27 05:43 PM

sounds like me here

nice write Kacy

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2005-02-27 05:54 PM

At first I thought you were describing Toerag's underwear

I love it!
Your work, NOT, I repeat, NOT Toerag's underwear!
Although Michael might like them a little

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2005-02-27 07:17 PM

LOL at your take on this one dear loper.

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